请结合下图内容及提示，以“My__________ Family Memory”为题，根据写作要求，写一篇不少于80词的短文。
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describe the memory What happened? When did it happen? Who was in the memory? |
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express your feelings or opinions What do you think of it? Why do you think so? |
写作要求：
1. 结合实际，用适当的形容词补全标题。
2. 短文须包含图中所有信息，并适当拓展。
3. 文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
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【答案】例文
My Funniest Family Memory
There are countless interesting memories in our family. Let me tell you one of them. It’s about eating.
I remember once, when I was at my grandma’s house, it’s time for dinner. I was so hungry that I ran to the table in a windy manner and started eating. I just had a bite of the food, feeling very spicy. I asked my mother, “Mom, why is vegetable pepper so hot?” Mom ran over and tasted it. She said, “This is not vegetable pepper. It’s pepper!” “Ah?” I asked in confusion. This is chili. No wonder it’s so spicy. “Give me some water!” The family laughed when they heard it.
In fact, there are many interesting family stories, waiting for us to discover. As long as you are serious about discovering it, you will feel that family fun everywhere.
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，属于材料作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章标题以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，不要遗漏提示中的“补全题目”这一要点，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，引出话题；
第二步，根据要点讲述这一事件发生的时间、人物及经过，要列举具体的事例；
第三步，抒发你对这件事的评价并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①countless interesting memories无数的有趣回忆
②in confusion疑惑地
③no wonder难怪
[高分句型]
①I was so hungry that I ran to the table in a windy manner and started eating.（so that引导的结果状语从句）
②As long as you are serious about discovering it, you will feel that family fun everywhere.（as long as引导的条件状语从句）
